I like the repetitions. It’s one of those forms that has to be done well or it falls completely flat, like when the rhymes…don’t. LikeLiked by 1 person
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Bravo! The villanelle is a tough form and I enjoyed this.
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I’m quite fascinated with villanelle and like it. Thanks!
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I like the repetitions. It’s one of those forms that has to be done well or it falls completely flat, like when the rhymes…don’t.
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